simple, compound and complicated, I mean Complex sentences.

This is my writing assessment. I have independently tried to improve my sentences. I am looking to check that they make sense.I am checking my punctuation. I am good at understanding simple,compound and complex sentences.

  Music vs Sports

I completely disagree that sports is more important than music. I believe that some people may think music is more important than sports. Well, I can’t deny it. Music is popular, but wouldn’t you want to be fit and healthy by playing sports?  I would. What do you think?

My main reason why I think sports is far more important than music is because, if you enjoy sports than wouldn’t you want to stay healthy and fit? But obviously if you like listening to music then you are going to be an unachievable blobfish and you are going to fail in life. Music is cool but wouldn’t you want to be standing on one of the first place stands holding a gold medal, making your family proud at the world wide Olympics?

Another reason why I think sports is far more important than music is because I would rather go to sports tournaments than stay at school listening to music all day because don’t you want to be active? Don't you want to stand out in this world? I would absolutely love that, Wouldn’t you? It would be nice to achieve something in life? And that something would be sports!

My last reason why sports is more important than music because whoever wants to achieve something its not going to be listening to music. It is going to be something people like to call sports! Most people think sports is magnificent. Because it is! And I assure that sports can make a difference to our lives.

To finish off and support my argument sports is important! Just get that in your brain. Music is fun and all but sports is better! If you play sports you can improve on things you have failed once in your life. For example, say that I came last in cross country. But when I began to play sports I began to move up and feel better about myself. For the last, final time sports is important!