Who recycles? Its actually good to because there are several reasons why we should start recycling.

WALT use linking phrases between paragraphs to support the development of the text. I am trying to persuade my readers to start recycling because there are several reasons why we need to start recycling because most of our rubbish goes to the landfill.What I found hard was coming up with my ideas and research facts.

I believe that the world is piling up with rubbish. We are ruining the environment. I think it needs to stop right now! Many people are still throwing away all of their rubbish but why? Why would they do that when they can actually recycle their rubbish.

My question is Why don’t people just use the three R’s reuse reduce recycle. I’d rather reduce our rubbish in the world than just letting it increase. It’s just not precise how everyone throws all their rubbish in the landfill instead of recycling it. Don’t deny it we all do it.

One the other hand I think not recycling is wrong because the world could end up being polluted or even worse there would be rubbish scattered everywhere on the ground. That is appalling. For your information I  don’t want that to happen. I found out that whenever rubbish gets into the sea water it forms a monstrous ball of rubbish that goes right down to the bottom of the sea.

Furthermore, I think we should be responsible for our rubbish landfill rather than burning our rubbish at home because I researched and I found out that all of the smoke caused from fires get sent into the sky and space and forms a bigger hole in the ozone layer. I would be a part of the solution, not the pollution. Plus when  I discovered that the Great Pacific garbage patch, also described as the Pacific trash vortex, is a gyre of marine debris particles in the central North Pacific Ocean discovered between 1985 and 1988.

In summary I think we should start recycling because it is important and we should start reducing the amounts of rubbish we throw in the dump.

Have you ever learnt about eels bike cycle I mean life cycle.

I am learning to summarise a book that we have been learning.

My next step is to find out all of the main ideas. There was a big main idea that I missed and I know what it is now.

Pacific Paradise.
By Mary Campbell.

Last night I read Pacific Paradise by Mary Campbell. It was mostly about eels life cycle. During the summer their bodies change,Their eye’s enlarge,their head becomes flatter and more slender & their tummy turns gold. They get ready for the migration to the sea. When they get there they spawn which means they get ready to have babies.

The part that surprised me was the part when it said some can be over 100 years old. Because I thought they only go up to 50 years old. Have you been reading cool books?

My beach holiday. I am learning to try use more speech marks more story and use more punchy sentences.

This is my recount story about the school holidays. I learned how to use short punchy sentences but not properly. I am also learning to add detail to my story and start sentences with adverbs.

My beach holiday.

It was a beautiful spring Friday afternoon when we traveled to Omapere for Nannie Annie's one year. When we got to the gate I could just feel the jolliness pumping through my heart, I was so excited to see my dad's family. I could see the water straight down off the veranda. It was tremendous.

Have you ever felt the waves rushing over your head like the shower water? Well I have and it wasn’t that amazing, what I mean is it was a hot windy day and me Carlos and Dylan were swimming in the waves like little tiny fish, The water at the beach was amazing but it was colder then Antarctica. When I jumped out, it was about five o'clock.

A few minutes later all we could hear was “Kai time” shouted aunty Moana. Carlos my dad Dylan my mum and I all  rushed to the house, there was burgers, fish, boil up and for dessert we had cookies and cream ice cream,chopped peanuts,whipped cream and the amazing chocolate sauce. It was better than anything else in the world, it was like rainbows were melting in my mouth!, it was a dream you could die for.Lovingly It was delicious.

After Kai we talked about what we could do. “Rudely I shouted yep let's play Charades now”. Now it was Dylan’s turn.The first category was Disney princesses, Cinderella, glass shoe, home before twelve o'clock, “CINDERELLA, shouted Dylan. YES”, Snow, white, the queen, white is in her name, “SNOW WHITE, Yes. Time is ticking I respectfully said”. next up  guess the face. “Kevin our group answered in so much laughter yep, next Tehanah, Yep” I was so embarrassed of myself. Next “Moana answered team red answered with cheerfulness building up in their stomachs”, yes correct up next  “Dylan, Yes, Hare,No,Sue,yes”. A couple faces later it was about one o’clock and time for bed. I felt so so weary after the game of guess the face. Merrily I skipped off to my bed.

Happily I really enjoyed my holiday with my dad's family.

Animals,Big and Small.

This week I was learning to make up poems about animals that shows assonance and use the correct homophones for Their,there and They're. I learnt how to make amazing poems showing assonance
My next step is to learn about alliteration and include it in my poems.

This is my first persuasive writing.

Lollies at school.
I think that we should be allowed to have lollies in our School. Lollies are sweet like honey and There is three reasons why we should be allowed to bring lollies.

 

Reason one, Imagine us dying on the inside can you imagine sucking on that sweet sweet lollipop MMMMMMMMMMMM!

Reason two, when I am in class I just want to have a lollie “Well if you know what I mean” do you know what I mean?

In Summary, I Think that we should be able to have lollies in our school. I think this because lollies are delicious and it isn’t fear that we aren’t allowed to bring lollies.

Come on people Please let Tautoro School be allowed to Have a lot of lollies.

My next learning steps are:

Be independent at structure

Use emotive words

Add more supporting detail

These are my two hoes that I want to focus on this term.