Writing Results!!😍🤩🤪🤯

Today we got our writing results!🤩 I was stoked
as it explains in the piece of writing below. Also
here below is my writing goal. Enjoy !

Today, we got our writing results…. I was
overwhelmed and so very stoked with my
writing piece! These results were some of
the best results that I have ever received in
my school history. I was so happy with myself,
Believe it or not, I actually told my teacher that
I thought I didn't do very well. But the outcome
was ecstatic! My goal for Explanation writing, is
in the first paragraph were I state my subject, it is
to name the subject and then to explain more about
it straight away. My teacher, Whaea Mary explained
to me that if I explained my topic more in my intro,
I would have scored in the 50´s. I am above my
expected level. I am going to need to stay on the
same level until I finish school. To achieve this goal,
it is vital to me to be knowing all about the writing
features that are set for me. By doing this I will stay
on my same level and the only way to go for me is up
and achieving many more goals to come.

S+L	Ideas	Org	Sent	Vocab	spe	punc	total
5	6	6	6	6	6	6	41

Here is my writing piece:

Here is the levels for writing and my total points
were 41 I am at the bottom of the list which is the
best level... YAY!!

Total Score	Level
7 - 13	1b	After 1 year at school
14	1p	After 2 years
15
16
17	1a
18
19	2b	After 3 years
20
21	2p	By the end of Year 4
22
23	2a
24
25	3b	By the end of Year 5
26
27	3p	By the end of Year 6
28	3a
29
30	4b	By the end of Year 7
31

32/33	4p	By the end of Year 8
34/35	4a
36 - 38	5b	By the end of Year 9
39	5p
40 - 41	5a