Want sugar sugar? Sike, Think before drink!

This week we have been doing Science! We are doing an experiment. The experiments are around sugary drinks and diet drinks. Are They Harmful?Here is my Piktochart about SCIENCE!

Science! 💻

This week we have been doing Science! We are doing an experiment. The experiments are around sugary drinks and diet drinks. Are They Harmful? We have to First put an egg into a container and and then put 200 mls of different kinds of drink in. My hypothesis (Prediction) was, I thought that the egg was going to change colour.I was correct and the E2 drink stained the outside of the egg shell. We all found that very disgusting! Here are some interesting photos of our eggs and the drinks.

1. We had seven eggs and then put one of each container.
2. Then we put a sugary drink in the container.
3. After that we got a PH strip then we immersed it in the container filled with different kinds of drinks for one to ten minutes.
4. Then we looked if it changed colour after one to ten minutes.
5. After all of that we took out the PH strip and compared it to the Ph Scale and then looked to see how acidic it was.
6. To finish off we are going to leave it for a few days.

simple, compound and complicated, I mean Complex sentences.

This is my writing assessment. I have independently tried to improve my sentences. I am looking to check that they make sense.I am checking my punctuation. I am good at understanding simple,compound and complex sentences.

  Music vs Sports

I completely disagree that sports is more important than music. I believe that some people may think music is more important than sports. Well, I can’t deny it. Music is popular, but wouldn’t you want to be fit and healthy by playing sports?  I would. What do you think?

My main reason why I think sports is far more important than music is because, if you enjoy sports than wouldn’t you want to stay healthy and fit? But obviously if you like listening to music then you are going to be an unachievable blobfish and you are going to fail in life. Music is cool but wouldn’t you want to be standing on one of the first place stands holding a gold medal, making your family proud at the world wide Olympics?

Another reason why I think sports is far more important than music is because I would rather go to sports tournaments than stay at school listening to music all day because don’t you want to be active? Don't you want to stand out in this world? I would absolutely love that, Wouldn’t you? It would be nice to achieve something in life? And that something would be sports!

My last reason why sports is more important than music because whoever wants to achieve something its not going to be listening to music. It is going to be something people like to call sports! Most people think sports is magnificent. Because it is! And I assure that sports can make a difference to our lives.

To finish off and support my argument sports is important! Just get that in your brain. Music is fun and all but sports is better! If you play sports you can improve on things you have failed once in your life. For example, say that I came last in cross country. But when I began to play sports I began to move up and feel better about myself. For the last, final time sports is important!

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I am learning to hold the camera in the correct place and keeping it as still as I can and the movie making process.
To be successful I had to:
First the positioning of the camera perfect.
Keep the camera as still as I can.
I think I was successful because I was able to keep the camera still.
What I found hard was getting objects to help me on getting scenes perfect and getting my camera placing correct.
Next time I will use a tripod or a proper object to keep the camera still.
I learned about green screen that if you stand too close to the green screen wall green stuff will be around you.
Here is the videos:

Wan't to listen to a story?

I am showing my reading fluency.

To be successful I will:

• Pause at commas
• Stop at full stops
• Sound natural (not like a robot)
• Adjust my reading speed when I come  to difficult words

When I listen to my reading I know that I am learning to read with expression and fluency.

I think I was successful because I was not reading like a robot and I paused at full stops and commas.
My screencast

9 parts of speech.

W.A.L.A the 9 parts of speech.

To be successful we had to:

Make a slideshow that directly said what the 9 parts of speech was.

I think I was successful because I was able to make a slideshow that was simple and very easy to understand.

What I liked was learning about the 9 parts of speech. 

Have you ever worked more than 14 hours?

I have been learning to use words and phrases that enhances sadness and fear.

In class we have been learning about where our clothes are made and we had to write a story pretending that we had to work in sweatshops. It was devastating finding out that those children are having to work 14 hours of their lives, 7 days a week.

I think I was successful because I was able to use a reasonable amount of fear and sadness mood.

My next step is to try use interesting words to hook in my readers.

Here is my story.

Working at the Nike Factory.

On a muggy and still Monday morning I wearily rolled out of bed.I began to get ready for work. The moment I walked in the door, half asleep as the boss was standing there as the children were doing their work .

The boss looked at me with a stern look and shouted “You're five minutes late!” The moment a word came out of his mouth my shoulders sunk and I stood there as still as a statue “But?” “No buts” “I'm sorry” I stutted.

I walked to my work station and began to work. Five hours later the buzzer finally buzzed because it was time for lunch. We had stale yuck rice! Next to me I noticed a monstrous amount of rubbish. I could smell the rottenness of all the piled up rubbish. The next thing I knew, The buzzer Buzzed to get back to work.

I didn’t get to lay a finger on food, but I quickly shoved the whole bowl of rice in my mouth.  When I walked back into the factory the poor kids including me had to get back to work for five more hours.

I let out a big sigh and said “Could this get any worse?” Well it did, everyone could smell the putrid stench of the glue causing the kids to  get sick. One of the children told the boss that she had a sore stomach “Well harden up and get back to work now!”Our boss insisted” Are you going to be okay?” I said. “This feels like hell” I yelled.

Finally, it is 8:00 pm. I can finish work and go to sleep. I am too exhausted to work any more”I said to my friend.