Wednesday 31st August 2016.
Persuasive writing.
It is not fair that we do not have a footpath for the Tautoro School children well I think that we should have a footpath for children's safety. Wouldn’t that be tremendous especially if it is for the kids safety? I think we should put a footpath from Mrs Paraha’s to the Tautoro Dairy. And change the speed limit, Who's with me? That will be kind and respecting our Rangatira and their moko’s.
My first main reason why I think we should have a footpath is because what if there is a kid in the middle of the road just standing there, you know that there is no time to stop for them. Kids walk to school every morning on the side of the road even when it is foggy. Car crashes or hit and runs are waiting to come. Put this footpath here before someone’s waiting for the bus and cars can't see them and run them over.
My second reason why we should change the speed limit is because we're here we're not invisible.Come on the Council of Kaikohe let us have our victory at least put a pedestrian at the Tautoro dairy for people and children to cross in safety. Can we please have one or two on our road it would be helpful for our safety and it would be changing people’s lives. please say yes. If you prevent this from happening you will feel the madness of Tautoro school.
In summary I think that we should put a foot path from Mrs Paraha’s to the Tautoro dairy are you with me? Anyone who knows how to run a community will agree.
Hi Tehanah I like reading your persuasive writing it was very persuasive and it showed your true beliefs and I think it was amazing, and I 100% believe that we should have a foot path. I also liked how you are thinking of other instead of yourself because not much people do that and I really enjoyed reading your writing.
ReplyDeleteHi Tehanah I like reading your persuasive writing it was very persuasive and it showed your true beliefs and I think it was amazing, and I 100% believe that we should have a foot path. I also liked how you are thinking of other instead of yourself because not much people do that and I really enjoyed reading your writing.
ReplyDeleteTino pai Tehanah, I have printed two copies off. I will post one to council and you can take one to show your whanau. Great persuasive writing.
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