Can you figure out whose prospective I'm working at? It is our of the Seal or Danny.
SC: I will use
- Descriptive vocabulary (level-up my words)
- Use present or future tense verbs
- Write from either the seal or Danny's perspective.
- Predict what Danny will see, feel, experience.
“Wow, this place looks amazing!” It is very quiet and the weather here looks Great. “I wonder what it would look like up there?” (He stares at the many mountains). “I bet there is many great views from up there”. I just love to ride bikes! (as he gets to the river crossing) “I can do this with ease👍” Wow,! Who knew that mother nature could produce such a beautiful thing like this? Up here the clouds flow just above my head, the views are priceless, there are many little self made rock pools and the best part is that I get to ride down! “As I make it down the first mountain, I just knew that I could conquer the higher mountain point.. As you would know, I did and I am so very proud of myself. The next time I go biking, I am going to remind myself that I can do it, just like today. My new saying to keep me motivated it I can do it, Just keep going! This is just perfect and relaxing, to row across the calm rippling water beneath me. What makes it more mesmerising is the fact that the sun is just about to set at the cloak of the horizon and the bike ride sure did tier me out.
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