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This is mine and Aj's screen cast about our strategy hope you enjoy.

This is my first persuasive writing.

Lollies at school.
I think that we should be allowed to have lollies in our School. Lollies are sweet like honey and There is three reasons why we should be allowed to bring lollies.

 

Reason one, Imagine us dying on the inside can you imagine sucking on that sweet sweet lollipop MMMMMMMMMMMM!

Reason two, when I am in class I just want to have a lollie “Well if you know what I mean” do you know what I mean?

In Summary, I Think that we should be able to have lollies in our school. I think this because lollies are delicious and it isn’t fear that we aren’t allowed to bring lollies.

Come on people Please let Tautoro School be allowed to Have a lot of lollies.

My next learning steps are:

Be independent at structure

Use emotive words

Add more supporting detail

This is my book review 2 about finding China hope you enjoy.

Thursday 18th O August 2016.

My book review.

By Eva Wong Ng.

Last night I read Finding China. It was mostly about and eleven yr old girl and she went to a school in Shanghai, China, she got homesick and missed her mum and dad. She said that the Chinese work more than she was used to.

My favorite part was when a girl named Sophie asked if Natalie wanted to be Sophie’s friend.

This is my rotation about quarter turns.

This is my goals 2016.